Sandcastles and Cigarettes
by Hannah Andrews
She appears peripherally—a
shimmering blaze of brightness, like sunshine glinting off a mirror splice. I
catch my breath and turn my head slowly towards her, anticipating her
disappearance. She crisps into focus. I blink, and then again, slide my
sunglasses down my nose, then back in place, positive the polarized lenses will
render her but a glare. She remains.
If
she is real, am I the ghost?
I pinch myself. Per usual, I
feel nothing. My feet hold fast as if weighted, as if they are sandbags
guarding against a flash flood. My mouth is a desert. I can only watch.
She looks like a land-legged
mermaid—alone at the ocean’s edge, skin summered to deep sienna, toes in the
sand. The breeze billows at her crepey white coverup and dances through her
inky, spiraled mane. She’d always been
but a concept to me. I’d only recently seen photos, yet I’d know her anywhere.
She is Carmen, my birthmother, and she’s but a heartbeat away.
I feel her. Does she feel me?
Look at me, I scream silently.
She turns and I see her face. It
is my face—the original to my facsimile. I rush to her, and watch her eyes
widen in what seems to me, has to be, recognition. She opens her arms but I
stop just short of her embrace. Distance has been drilled into my DNA.
“It’s you,” she says.
“How’d you know?” I don’t wait
for her answer before adding, “Did you even see me when I was born?” Or just throw me away? The last sentence
is only in my head.
“Not one glimpse,” she sighs. Winces. “They
wouldn’t let me. But, I’d know you anywhere. I imagined you everywhere. It’s
the weirdest thing. I swear I saw you on the pier the other day.”
My stomach knots, and I feel
like the sand is pulling me under. I can’t shake the feeling that time folded
in on itself, reversed, or maybe somehow sidewayed. I suddenly realize I’m
wearing some throwback velour tracksuit I hadn’t owned in years, the kind with
Juicy written across my ass. I cringe.
“Carmen, what year is it?”
She rolls her eyes like a bratty
teenager. “It’s 2002 silly. Why?”
Cold water prickles my feet.
“I drove out here this morning
from San Diego,” I say. “It was 2022. I came here to scatter your ashes.”
I hold out a small 6 by 6-inch mahogany
cremation box, with a smiling photo of her framed on the top. She’s 21 in the
photo, not the age at which she’d died, but the age at which her friend said
she’d prefer to be remembered. She takes the box, but upon realizing she’s
holding her own remains, shrieks and drops it in a pillow of sand. The color
drains from her face. She volleys questions at me in quick succession.
“My ASHES? I’m dead in 2022?
When did I die? When did we meet? I’m dead ?!”
“We never met,” I say, then
pause. It occurs to me how confusing it must be to meet your long-lost daughter
and also find out you’re dead, in one fell swoop. I wonder if this is some sort
of Southern California purgatory or parallel universe. I continue, “I think
maybe I somehow found a wormhole. I think this is a parallel universe, and also
the past? Can past be parallel? I don’t
know. We never met though. I went looking for you in 2020, but only found a
grave.”
“What? Where?” she prods. “I
don’t feel dead.”
“Well, not even a grave, just
ashes, which your best friend gave me a couple of weeks ago.” I answer, then
ramble on, “Well, she gave me her third.
Your son and your mother each have a third. They divvied you up. I met your
son, but your mom won’t talk to me. Says she doesn’t remember you being
pregnant.”
“She kicked me out!” Carmen
snaps.
“I know. Your friend told me.
Anyway, your son is nice. Successful. Married. Two daughters.” Something in me
bites, and instead of softening the blow, I hit harder. “I guess you chose the
right kid to keep—”
She bites back. “It wasn’t like
that. It was 1969. I was fifteen when I got pregnant with you and thirty-three
when I got pregnant with him.” She grabs her beach bag and begins rifling
through it. “ It was a whole different world. I was a whole different person.”
“Yeah, me too,” I say, full of
venom, "'cuz of you."
“If I could’ve kept you, I
would. I looked for you—”
“Your friend told me that too,”
I interject softly, wishing I could back up time again. Just five minutes earlier,
just to quell my inner mean girl.
I can’t even get retrospect right.
Carmen pulls a pack of
Parliaments from her bag, her hand visibly trembling as she lights one. I reach
over and pull it from her hand. I haven’t quit smoking yet in this timeline.
“Mmm yummy! Pfunks are the
best,” I say, and I take a big drag. I smoked Marlboro Lights but kept
Parliaments around for special occasions. This was definitely a special
occasion. She pulls another out for herself. Without thinking, I blurt out,
“No, it’s cancer. That’s what kills you in 2009. Stop smoking now. I will too,”
and I dip my cigarette in the still-moist sand.
“Kiddo, I’m friggin dead
already.”
“Unless you’re not. Or unless
there’s another you that’s still affected by the actions of this you—”
“Nah, I’m probably dead. I’ve
been feeling weird for a while. Can’t believe I didn’t even know I was kaput,
though. None of this makes sense.”
She’s right. It doesn’t. You couldn’t plot this into a
movie, but still, here we are. I’m sitting in the past, lecturing my dead
mother on the evils of cigarettes. Trying to save her life. Carmen looks down,
bites her lip, then hands me the remainder of the pack.
“I guess you can’t be too
careful,” she shrugs. She speaks softly then, “So, why here, why now?”
“I dunno. Maybe because your
friend just now gave me your ashes? See, in the future, after I find your son
and your bestie, I also find out that in the past I lived right down the street
from you, right here in Venice. Crazy right? Then, back in the future, I start
remembering all these weird things that happened to me back then. It occurs to
me that all that weird stuff was some sort of cosmic electrical misfire—because
we were both there, two blocks from each other. Made me crazy, thinking of all
the what ifs—”
“The what-ifs have haunted me
since the day they took you away,” she sighs.
Her words crash against me like
a cold wave.
“I’m sorry I didn’t look sooner.
I didn’t want to interfere with your life—” I cut myself off, then stammer on.
“When I finally put our puzzle pieces together, I started wishing real hard,
wishing I could bend time or maybe make magic. Like in that one Twilight Zone episode. Or like Bewitched. I was convinced if I just
concentrated—you know I used to think she was my mom, actually.”
“Elizabeth Montgomery?”
“No, her TV character. I was a
kid. I thought Samantha the character, the witch, was real. Then I thought
maybe Rita Moreno was my mom because she actually looked like me.”
She stares at me like I have two
heads.
“It’s called a ‘ghost kingdom,’ and it’s
totally normal. Google it.” I hand her my iPhone. She tilts her head like the
RCA Victor dog—at it, at me. I surmise Google isn’t a thing yet, or at least
isn’t in the vernacular.
I snatch my smartphone back and
attempt an explanation.
“Ghost Kingdom. For adopted
kids—It’s like subconsciously looking for lost moms and dads and—It’s a trauma
response or something. Oh, it doesn’t matter.” Voice cracking, I continue,
“Fast forward, I came back to Venice this morning to scatter your ashes. Like,
woke up in the middle of the night, and just had to drive out today for some
reason. I walk out here in the present, but when I go to open up the cremation keepsake box, all of sudden,
you’re here, and we’re in the past. I dunno. Maybe none of this is real. Maybe
I’m dead. Maybe I’m a ghost. I never felt real anyway.”
“Nah, I get it. You were always
my ghost too,” she says, “I could never shake you.”
It occurs to me that if it's 2002,
I’m twenty years younger, unless I’m now four years her senior. I look at my
hands, and their softness shows youth, or at least youth adjacent. I consider
asking her for a mirror, then I realize all the mirror I ever needed is in the
flesh and blood or phantasm before me.
We sit in stone silence in the
velvety sand. Remnants of waves pool around us, then pull away.
“We can scatter your ashes if
you want,” I offer.
“Eww. That’s dark,” she says,
stifling a giggle, “I guess you inherited my sense of humor.”
We laugh, but the sounds are so
similar they meld into one.
“I always knew we were tethered,
kiddo,” she says.
And finally, we embrace. She
feels so real. I feel so real. I never
want to let go.
“I don’t know how this works,
Carmen,” I finally say, tears streaming down my face. “Maybe we live forever in
this parallel universe and our other selves live on too. I don’t know. But it's
worth a shot, right?”
“It is." She smiles.
"But, can you call me Mom?"
Through blurry eyes, I glimpse the cremation box in my
peripheral. I sense something different about it. Then, my heart practically
leaps out of my chest.
“Carmen, I mean, Mom, look!” I
pick it up and show her. The photo on top has changed. It is still her, still
beautiful, but her skin is creased, crepey, and her hair is snow white. She
must be 80 or 90 in the photo now.
She stares down at the photo,
then up at me. We burst into laughter, elated at this new “what-if.” Did we
wrinkle time? Do we have thirty more years instead of six? I’m afraid to put
voice to my query. Instead, I watch the waves crash. I listen to her tell me a
million stories. I build long overdue sandcastles with her, the ghost of me,
and wish for a never-ending summer.
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Hannah Andrews lives and writes in San Diego.
Her tragi-comic short memoir, "Skateaway" was a top selection in the
2021 San Diego Memoir Showcase and published in the anthology Shaking the
Tree: Vol. 5. Her essays and poetry have been featured online at Severance,
Adoptee Voices EZine, and several Medium publications, The Narrative Arc.
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